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We Used To Wait
Contributed by
duff
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Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 05:51:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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It’s back and I want to die again
A stain upon everything living
Lost inside a mind built by pain
I can feel my control giving
This broken heart magnetic to sorrow
These pages can’t explain the hurt
I’m pathetic for chasing tomorrow
A study past the point of alert
My damaged body too sick to ache
I’m begging you to please end this soon
For my eyes to see light was a mistake
Mama’s lion dying beneath the moon
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duff
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2010-11-30 17:51:37]
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Re: We Used To Wait
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by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 10:26:51 PM AEST
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Oh duff this is pain but sweet write..
Love it as usual
Take care
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Re: We Used To Wait
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 12:09:24 AM AEST
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| In the first verse the mind trying hard in vain to hold the pain then the heart bleeds it on to the page and as hope fades then the most beautiful line of reaching out to say,' can't you see!........Mama's lion dying beneath the moon.....poetry at its most painful but at its most exquisite too. |
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Re: We Used To Wait
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by ming on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 09:42:56 AM AEST
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Very pretty in pain...Was he a Leo? *wink*
ming |
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