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alone
Contributed by
kassi124
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 12:39:00 PM in AEST
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What if one day i wake up and see
that the only person left is me?
That everyone else is long since gone
and that every choice i made was wrong
if i never learn to let go and have fun
soon with me everyone else will be done
together always hand in hand
their partnerships drew the line in the sand
alone i will stand at the end
i wish i'd managed to keep a friend
at least im finding that there is something in me
i might be alone but at least i'll be free
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Re: alone
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by TheFireThatFreezes on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 04:59:05 AM AEST
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nice poem , but make sure you capitalize the i's and the first world at the beginning of each sentence.
Otherwise, really good. |
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Re: alone
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by Nonefound on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 10:59:48 PM AEST
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| food for thought. I like this poem. |
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Re: alone
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by 2bpositive on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 10:46:50 PM AEST
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nice write. I can really relate
that sadness
only seems to escalate
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Re: alone
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 12:38:45 PM AEST
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great work and geat efforts you put into it.
Takecare
Anbarean |
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Re: alone
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by whitt on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:49:24 PM AEST
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| ah the spelling isnt what makes a poem true to heart..its the meanings , feelings , and thoughts put in it that makes it lovely :) great read thanks ! |
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