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Out of the Darkness
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 01:07:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Smooth red sheets upon her skin
A tempered beauty deep within,
Atop a heap of tender silk,
And like a rose, her heart does wilt,
Her petals float and gently soar,
And when they land upon the shore,
The tender waves will carry them,
Up to a dark and shadowed glen,
And it is there that they will find,
A beauty that lies deep inside,
Her shattered heart is waiting there,
And it may seem beyond repair,
But in the black of darkest night,
Your love will help her find the light.
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2010-11-30 01:07:00]
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Re: Out of the Darkness
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 02:58:54 AM AEST
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Another good write.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Out of the Darkness
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by Fern on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 06:08:16 AM AEST
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| This poem has beauty, rhythm, and a wonderful almost hypnotic cadence. What I think your stunning, and dare I say "glorious" poem implies is: HOPE! DON'T GIVE UP, MY DARLING! I'M COMING FOR YOU! That and more. Your concluding lines reach beyond the normal bounds of beauty and truth as we know it...they are SPELLBINDING! "But in the black of darkest night...your love will help her find the light." My God, this is an incredible poem that you have constructed. Your audience begs for more from you! |
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Re: Out of the Darkness
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by Jonathon_J_Young on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 01:57:26 PM AEST
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| wicked stuff! good work! |
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