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You Reached For Me
Contributed by
fern
on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 12:03:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The day I told you I was leaving you
was a cold and cheerless day in my life.
When I leaned close to you,
and in a voice trembling with emotion,
whispered, "It's all over between us,"
your eyes rolled all up in your head
and you slumped to the sidewalk
like a limp rag-doll
who'd suddenly lost her footing.
"NO!" you pleaded through your tears...
reaching up for me.
Sensing your discomfort, I quickly added,
"Well...gotta' run."
But then as I turned and started walking away,
you raised yourself slightly and broke wind.
"Excuse me," you sobbed.
"What...I didn't hear anything,"
I answered, as I hurried on my way.
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2010-11-29 12:03:31]
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Re: You Reached For Me
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 12:28:24 AM AEST
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This I found myself chuckling to!! He broke wind and said 'Excuse me!!' I presume if this is a serious poem, then it's of a real life situation. Whatever, it was nicely written!
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: You Reached For Me
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 02:04:31 AM AEST
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| A really good piece of writing. Serious? well even if it is it still brought a huge grin to my face. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: You Reached For Me
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 09:05:04 AM AEST
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| hahahahaha..wow..i'm not sure if this is a serious real life situation or not..but it's sad, and then really funny..nicely done. |
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Re: You Reached For Me
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by Jonathon_J_Young on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 11:21:01 AM AEST
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| i could definitely see that happening in real life to me. very nice work! ;D |
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Re: You Reached For Me
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by huwbeauty on
Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 03:45:10 AM AEST
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| From sad and depressing to bloody hilarious.Very honest and real. |
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