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Hearts Journey
Contributed by
butterflyperfect
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Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 10:58:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Every heart goes on a journey
And every journey ends
Alot of relationships
End as being friends
Tears and heartache come
As a chapter we go through
Telling us to remember
All that we do
It's all just a part of a rotation
A part of life
Whether sweet and simple
Or tormented and full of strife
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butterflyperfect
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2010-11-29 10:58:03]
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Re: Hearts Journey
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by Fern on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 11:08:12 AM AEST
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| An excellent philosophy! Very well-written! Learning to take the good with the bad and then learning the lessons that each taught you. Unfortunately, some of us never seem to learn from life's experiences and continue to make the same mistakes over and over. Yes...every heart goes on a journey, as you brilliantly illustrate in your poem. And tears and heartache will most likely be part of the "cycle," again, as you tell us so cleverly in your wonderful poem. Good luck to you...you're a deep thinker, a great writer, and I suspect...a very very nice person! |
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Re: Hearts Journey
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by duff on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 05:22:27 PM AEST
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Excellent view and the title is perfect. Nothing is ever easy and love is the ultimate so tears and smiles go hand in hand. This is great work. Well done.
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Re: Hearts Journey
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by sride686 on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 07:00:30 PM AEST
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A very good piece and said to say most the time it
Is a struggle but nothing worth having every comes
Easy. Thanks for the words and it has a nice flow
To it and it does have a good title. Steve
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Re: Hearts Journey
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by Jonathon_J_Young on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 11:28:50 AM AEST
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| my kinda poetry! ;) |
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