|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Cemetery Tree
Contributed by
rfburn
on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 04:16:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
When the ancient tree in the center,
Finally falls or otherwise dies,
Then the spirits that rest below it,
Will seek revenge for their demise.
When no longer held so fast,
Inside the old dead tree,
Their spirits will be loosed to roam,
For all of eternity.
If separation bore them peace,
And they left the same behind,
Their spirits will roam the earth,
And that will be their sign.
But if they left the world in torment,
With torment still in their heart,
Their spirits will roam the earth,
And fear will be their mark.
Copyright ©
rfburn
... [
2010-11-28 16:16:31]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Cemetery Tree
(User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 05:31:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I like this write it has a nice flow to it and reads
easy which makes it a good read. It has a good
closer to it with the last few lines and so many
of us have torment in are hearts so I guess we to
will roam the earth and leave are mark. Steve |
|
|
Re: The Cemetery Tree
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 11:14:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very wise, thought provoking words.
blessings,
emy |
|
|
Re: The Cemetery Tree
(User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 02:51:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I can only echo the other comments, I really like this,great last verse. |
|
|
Re: The Cemetery Tree
(User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 01:59:32 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I like this write. I really relate to thoughts that it provokes. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
