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Confused Hearts
Contributed by
whitt
on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 10:51:31 PM in AEST
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Romeo and Juliet i bet
Never had it this tough
You havent decided yet
So Im calling your bluff
You say Im your love
Promising me forever
Im all you think of
Your words are clever
Now my heart is shattered
With no one to catch the pieces
To you nothing ever mattered
My thoughts of you increases
You murdered my pulsing heart
Cracked it with a solid bat
Love was fake from the start
I was your backup doormat
At twelve the clock will chime
My uncanny emotions are mixing
Youve wasted too much time
My heart requires fixing
Now my heart is shattered
With no one to catch the pieces
To you nothing ever mattered
My thoughts of you increases
Copyright ©
whitt
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2010-11-27 22:51:31]
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Re: Confused Hearts
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 10:57:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Sad but great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Confused Hearts
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by nrazak1 on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 03:17:07 PM AEST
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Very sad and touching.
It has such a deep meaning.!
Good work! |
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Re: Confused Hearts
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 04:14:47 PM AEST
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| I have written many poems about love recently, and I really like this one. It really captures the feeling. It seems that loyalty does not come from promises, but from character. |
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Re: Confused Hearts
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 02:11:59 AM AEST
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| This is full of deep emotion, slightly sad but very well written, a joy to read. |
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Re: Confused Hearts
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by Nonefound on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 11:16:35 PM AEST
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| lovely well written I've been there to. |
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