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She
Contributed by
nirupam
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Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 09:29:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She stood passionless,
Asking for love.
I needed a mistaken identity
to respond ......
The hill-top evening matched so well
with her cool purple motivation.
I got fumbled, over-prepared.....
She took pity on me.
Her lip-gloss glared in crimson banter.
Copyright ©
nirupam
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2010-11-27 09:29:12]
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Re: She
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by nrazak1 on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 03:19:11 PM AEST
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Wow
It's so abstract and weird.
Which makes it so meaningful and amazing!
Awesome work! |
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Re: She
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 05:40:31 PM AEST
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A good original write, I dont know how many times
a guy gets over prepared I know I have HAHAHA,
thanks for the read. Steve |
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