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Heartless
Contributed by
duff
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Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 10:22:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When you begin to panic and you can’t stand it
I’m here to accept the wrong even after I’m gone
I hate it when you cry because it erases what’s right
Again on speaking terms until I make your heart burn
So much eating away knowing there is nothing I can say
Sweet whispers synthetic while you question me pathetic
You wanted a rising scene to feel better about being mean
No longer am I me but a stranger outside the mezzanine
Weakened by your consistence I stand by my resistance
A future promising pain and sunny days forgetting the rain
Good luck no hard feelings and goodbye if you’re reading
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-11-26 22:22:26]
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Re: Heartless
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by Anbarean on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 12:19:24 AM AEST
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You did it again Duff as always...
""""Good luck no hard feelings and goodbye if you are reading""""
Oh I love though its pain but you put pain in words and it comes up so sweet...
Love It
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Re: Heartless
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 03:55:22 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
what is there to say? You continue to enhance your reputation as a fine poet. This is very strong, sad maybe, but beautifully executed as always. |
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Re: Heartless
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by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 04:00:05 AM AEST
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"You wanted a rising scene to feel better about being mean"
That line reminded me so much of my ex.
brilliant. |
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