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The Fog
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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White fog is clouding my brain
I hear the pounding in my ears again
I see the room start to shake
And feel the anger I’m drowning in.
I run to my room, so no one can see
The monster that’s become of me
I lock the door, pull out my knife
Wishing for the bravery to just end my life
I strike myself with the blade
Perhaps my arm, perhaps my leg
The blood runs down, onto the floor
But I just keep cutting, more and more
Finally I hear you calling for me
I’m jerked back to a world, in which I shouldn’t be
I start to breathe again, in great heavy gasps
And search for an explanation different from the last
My hands are still shaking
As I slowly return to you
You ask me why I’m shaking
I tell you to get a ***** clue
Then the yelling starts
As your anger rises too
I’m telling you, you’re wasting your time
Because no one will ever know the truth.
Copyright ©
BlackFire9786
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2003-04-21 14:05:00]
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Re: The Fog
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by Amoeba on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 02:13:06 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I really enjoyed reading this one. Well Done. |
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Re: The Fog
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by vydana on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 04:00:39 PM AEST
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| A wonderful poem. You're a talented poet. |
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Re: The Fog
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:27:40 AM AEST
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| raw emotions run in the family i guess...wuahahaha...twins till the end! i could read your poems all day and forever. love ya sis! |
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