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A Shattered Truth
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 03:36:01 AM in AEST
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The stars that have a broken glow,
Are often ones that do not show,
the greatness that lies deep inside,
broken by shame’s hollow lies,
A truth that very few can see,
Lies buried very far beneath,
The blind enunciated glare
Of narrow minded plebs who share,
A deadly un-sedated lie,
For which there is no alibi,
And if you want to see the truth,
Of broken dreams and shattered youth,
Then open up your eyes and see,
This nation is no longer free.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2010-11-26 03:36:01]
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Re: A Shattered Truth
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 03:40:16 AM AEST
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| I like this.Certainly got me thinking. |
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Re: A Shattered Truth
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 04:58:51 AM AEST
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| I like your style very much. This is full of hidden depth and very though provoking. Well done. |
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Re: A Shattered Truth
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 09:14:11 AM AEST
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Poetically sound,depth ridden passage
in this passage there is something so gripping!
it's the aura of mystic which threatens to overwhelm you it seems,
whcih drives this write home
well written
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Re: A Shattered Truth
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 12:42:36 PM AEST
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Great writing and oh so true.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: A Shattered Truth
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by Aspirant on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 12:00:28 AM AEST
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| Excellent. This poem really channeled my growing frustration about the world I see around me. |
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