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Fallen
Contributed by
Black13
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Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 11:05:16 PM in AEST
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I can still taste the pain
coming from your life.
I can still feel your heart break
with every beat it takes.
I told you long ago that
even if he could forgive me
I knew that I never would
when it's more than I can bear.
I told you long ago that
I loved you more than life.
I meant every word I spoke
and this my only way to save you.
Praying all I can that you heal.
Hoping for you all the best.
Even if you will forever hate me
............
Copyright ©
Black13
... [
2010-11-25 23:05:16]
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Re: Fallen
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 04:31:25 PM AEST
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Hm.. Not exactly sure what this is about.
But I like it. Even if I don't fully understand it. |
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Re: Fallen
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by shelby on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 05:30:04 PM AEST
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Touching emotional write. Good work.
Michelle |
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Re: Fallen
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 06:02:49 PM AEST
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| Sounds like you made a mistake you regret and can't forgive yourself. This is a tough situation, but remember, for every mistake there is a punishment and once that punishment has been served, you must move on and forgive yourself. |
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