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The Flies
Contributed by
the_unknown
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 02:14:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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All the flies are buzzing 'round you
You stunk up the place with your lies
And you dropped everything and made a mess on the floor
Your floor's covered with deceit and now you're wallowing in it
Stuck, stuck to the ground you planted your feet in
Secrets slowly grow up you, vines slowly choking the life out
The flies are swarming, and I've got to go
This mess is too big and you don't want any help
So I'll walk out, looking at my feet
Regret and sorrow linger on my skin
I need to wash myself
Wash away the stench you made of your life and your soul
I'll leave you a map, but I can't free you now
You're alone, alone with the flies
Clean yourself up, free yourself from their grasp
The one's that have consumed your everything
Then come crawling and I promise
I'll help you to your feet
Copyright ©
the_unknown
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2010-11-24 14:14:18]
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Re: The Flies
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 02:26:52 PM AEST
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| Life is complicatied.... I like the way this conveys the pain from consequences for actions we all make. Very relatable and true. Good write :) |
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Re: The Flies
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 04:06:55 PM AEST
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Great, great great!
Kepp up the rockin write.
luv ya,
emy |
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