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Forget or die(oublie ou meurt)

Contributed by petulinka on Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 02:42:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You call him love
Feels like the journey´s having ways typed deep into fate
the strong burst follows
be ready to D I E
no need to worry
just run across his bleeding blade

predicted future
still in the motion
f a a a a a lling

in love your shield is just appalling

his heart stopped
severe
strike
stopped

roses are leaning out your scull
and cold as ice you´re beginning to get
no more living no more worries,
suffer is now your only dept

tabula rasa

eyes wide open heart wide close
terrific dreams are the sole thing you own
the last gasp left the ultimate dose
see, cadavers are scared to the last bone

trying to breathe and stop the staring
with oceans full of drops
heaven is pretty thou somehow
hell into your mind slowly pops

been there in paradise already like two three times

they are walking on you in dust thus turned
reborn new life feels what you earned
thou stuck between two words it seems you´re now
one is the grief the other sorrow to be found

forget or die

your heart just stopped and salvation lost its meaning on the way
as effort has no sense as you know the prize you´re sure you´d pay

you tell him love
and die on the place

cos if the show continued, was real
you´d lose him and nor death would safe what you´d feel




Copyright © petulinka ... [ 2010-11-23 14:42:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Forget or die(oublie ou meurt) (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 02:46:27 PM AEST
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A unique and refreshing write which is always a good thing. There is a style about this that is nice to see and there is so much between the lines that it makes you come back for another read. A different take on love and a well written piece. Well done.


Re: Forget or die(oublie ou meurt) (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 11:36:31 AM AEST
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I love it so nice and well written.
Anbarean


Re: Forget or die(oublie ou meurt) (User Rating: 1 )
by StacyLynnG on Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 10:34:46 AM AEST
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"suffer is now your only dept"
Lovely and unique! Thanks for sharing!


Re: Forget or die(oublie ou meurt) (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 03:03:23 AM AEST
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Very strong piece.
Full of mood.
I liked it

Steve




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