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A Broken Heart Like A Broken Kite
Contributed by
Anbarean
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 01:28:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I was a little girl who use to play with dolls
No tasks, no worries, no troubles, no fears
I then lost my doll and I cry my tears
There he came and touch my heart by his love
I then love to be loved and he was my doll
He gave me strength and tell me don’t you fall
He said I will be back and I will see you soon
I wait for him with the sun set and rising moon
The changing months, years and the seasons blue
I was a girl then a lady then a woman there I go
My eyes were still at the door, he will come that I know
There he came he made me smile and there I flow
I hug him and I cry don’t you go I would die
He hugged me and kissed me and said I won’t lie
But I have to go, there’s one in my life I can’t deny
I stunned, I shocked, I cried, I begged back my life
Time played a worse game that can’t be cut by a knife
But now I am standing here with a broken heart like a broken kite
Copyright ©
Anbarean
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2010-11-23 13:28:30]
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Re: A Broken Heart Like A Broken Kite
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by bleedinheart on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 02:39:10 PM AEST
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| strong emotion good write |
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Re: A Broken Heart Like A Broken Kite
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by duff on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 04:10:03 PM AEST
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The way you transition back and forth from being a little girl to present is awesome writing and it's a clean transition. There is an innocence in your words yet the feelings of a woman are completely real and you can feel that. Consistent as always and great job.
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Re: A Broken Heart Like A Broken Kite
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 11:40:34 PM AEST
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You touched my heart with this one.
I loved this write, beautiful in its sadness.
So sorry your heart was broken though.
Hugs you
Michelle |
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Re: A Broken Heart Like A Broken Kite
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 01:28:40 PM AEST
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| pure emotions are sent through me as I read... beautiful write. |
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Re: A Broken Heart Like A Broken Kite
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 12:43:57 AM AEST
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Awesome writing. Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: A Broken Heart Like A Broken Kite
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by ammar on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 09:12:16 AM AEST
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Captivating. That had much depth, emotion and sincerity in it.
Keep writing
Peace
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Re: A Broken Heart Like A Broken Kite
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by Nobleclint on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 05:08:43 PM AEST
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| this poem is so touchy, I'd shed tears while readin it, your lyrics just broke my hrt feelin for her. Keep it up |
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