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My Dying Anthem.
Contributed by
resist77
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 12:00:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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And hope existed within my brain
As they cut it out
The children sing
And out she comes
Locked away for years
Please don't cry
There's nothing to fear
Freedom is free
The angels are here
The devil was me
But I've disappeared
Hope, you see it at last
Spreading delicate wings
She brings
Our brightest hopes and dreams
Say goodbye to reality
And welcome the serene
My beautiful,
I'm as dead as dead can be
Now close your eyes
Always in eachother's dreams.
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resist77
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2010-11-23 12:00:36]
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Re: My Dying Anthem.
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by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 12:14:28 PM AEST
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don't close your eyes...remain open because there is a tomorrow and there is a day brightness after a dark night...
Nice poem and well written..
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Re: My Dying Anthem.
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 11:42:50 PM AEST
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Well written but very sad.
I hope things are better for you soon.
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Re: My Dying Anthem.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 01:09:06 AM AEST
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Freedom is free
The angels are here
Well done even in its sadness.
Blessings,
emy |
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