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A Passage to Winter
Contributed by
nirupam
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 09:21:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Access to the honey-pot denied,
Ants crawled back to winter.
I followed them to the horizon of slumber,
Where lullabies hung in the drooping trees,
Where dreams came dropping from the skies.
Are you keen to strive back for the honey-pot?
Returning is as tedious as going over........
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nirupam
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2010-11-23 09:21:16]
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Re: A Passage to Winter
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by duff on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 09:56:21 AM AEST
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Open ended to let the reader wander onto their own conclusions. Mysterious and well written. This is a nice piece of writing.
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Re: A Passage to Winter
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 12:05:02 AM AEST
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I really liked this. I also love the open ending as well.
I followed them to the horizon of slumber.... lovely writing!
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