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Why
Contributed by
sride686
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Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 11:42:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Pain in my heart,
deceit in my mind,
words are twisted in riddles and rhymes,
life worth living,
life that has past,
look to the future but my sight will not last,
crooked lies as I start to cry,
was this my choice to suffer and die,
I scream out with words that will never die,
and today and tonight my thoughts are demise.
Steve
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2010-11-22 11:42:54]
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Re: Why
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by Anbarean on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 12:00:01 PM AEST
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"Words are twisted in riddle and rhymes"..
very nice poem..I like it very much..
keep it up
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Re: Why
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 08:28:38 PM AEST
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I felt this one.
These writes are different for you.
You ok??
Hugs
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Re: Why
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 01:16:56 PM AEST
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| "words are twisted in riddles and ryhmes" this line sums up that words are said with a thousand meanings and sometimes lacking the one you most wish it were. I think that is conveyed well in this write. When life gets you down write it out... you know what your own words mean better than anyone else. |
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