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Symbols
Contributed by
voice of the silent
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Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 09:06:03 PM in AEST
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Symbols in my head
Making different things hard to understand
The Hourglass, turns to thorns of a rose
The star, Explodes into me
Yet it's filled with beauty
And my symbol for Purpose
Melts away
I feel I've lost my way
These symbols in my head
They lead the way down a road of dread
I have to follow it to the end
Maybe these symbols will bring back a long lost friend.
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Re: Symbols
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by nirupam on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 10:27:22 PM AEST
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| a brief, mature exercise...the closing line tells all. |
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Re: Symbols
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by duff on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 10:28:09 PM AEST
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| Intricate with layers of wonderful imagery this is a really nice piece of writing. It's a smooth read from start to finish. Well done. |
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Re: Symbols
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 12:15:27 AM AEST
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| I love the imagery in this and the drawing towards that creativity that you have no choice but to follow. |
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