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You Can Make It
Contributed by
brialuv
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Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Dwelling on the past
Will only dim the light on your future
Move on, move forward, and keep going
Because behind every smile even the brightest
Is a story to tell.
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brialuv
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2010-11-20 16:17:36]
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Re: You Can Make It
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by duff on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:50:26 PM AEST
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This is great. It's short but each line is very well written and contains so much that the length doesn't matter. Well done.
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Re: You Can Make It
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by xxPullMyStringsxx on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 06:08:47 PM AEST
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I love short poems,
they can say so much in such a small amount of words!
Excellent job! :) |
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Re: You Can Make It
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 10:57:19 PM AEST
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| I love the first two lines of this complete in themselves and a gem of wisdom well written |
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Re: You Can Make It
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by huwbeauty on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 04:07:52 AM AEST
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| I like this.Nice and simple. |
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