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The Room
Contributed by
nirupam
on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 06:40:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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She stood still before knocking,
She knocked before stepping in.
The room was empty,
There were no signs of habitation
except for an expired rocking-chair,
Old stubborn orchids whispered
in suspended vacuum.
She never came to this room.
She couldn't find a door to knock upon.
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2010-11-20 06:40:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:57:40 PM AEST (User
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This is mysterious and a fun read because there is a haunting feeling about it that grips you. I enjoyed this.
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