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Unexceptable
Contributed by
JJAA_91
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Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 05:26:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The words you speak are nothing
but the tip of the iceberg.
How is it that for so long
it was only this I judged you upon
First impressions are key
and I was the lock.
It's rare to see it fit
first time so effortlessly.
Far from angels I considered you
but still I let you in.
A mistake that wont be made again
Copyright ©
JJAA_91
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2010-11-20 05:26:35]
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Re: Unexceptable
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by duff on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 05:02:05 PM AEST
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I like the attitude and how direct this write is. There is no messing around and the point being made is sharp as ever. Great job.
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Re: Unexceptable
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by nirupam on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 11:11:28 AM AEST
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| very sharp, smart and direct...like it... |
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Re: Unexceptable
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 02:36:35 PM AEST
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yes there's a certain attitude to this flow
I dig it
well done. |
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