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Dark Desperation
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:37:58 PM in AEST
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Ripping, pulling, thrashing,
Emotions like waterfalls crashing.
Its cold underneath all these fears,
Like living inside someones tears.
I'll hold you until i cant feel me.
I'll smother myself in the feeling.
The dreams will not stop and I'm dying.
This body i hold wont stop crying.
The ocean of love... it is churning,
But inside of hell I am burning.
My heart has turned black and its bleeding,
A fountain of love that is seething.
In deep chasms of grief I surrender.
An earthquake of love... you did render.
And even if inside I am dying,
unto myself I'll keep lying.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2010-11-19 23:37:58]
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Re: Dark Desperation
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by Anbarean on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:48:12 PM AEST
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wow I...Love ....It...such a beautiful touchy poem you write....
"Like living inside someones tears..."
very nice.....
and your last line...
great job...
Anbarean |
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Re: Dark Desperation
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by jonquilcottage on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 04:17:10 AM AEST
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| what a potent poem. great write. really hit home, keep up the good work |
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