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When I look into your eyes...
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:07:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Gripping fear of desertion,
Crushing fear of destruction,
Gliding fear of compassion,
Hiding fear of production.
Ripping fear of distortion,
Sneaky fear of corruption,
Jealous fear of redemption,
Troubled fear of disruption.
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Re: When I look into your eyes...
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:13:28 PM AEST
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As the saying goes, the eyes are the windows to the soul.
Powerful write here.
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Re: When I look into your eyes...
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by Anbarean on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:20:08 PM AEST
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Gliding fear of compassion.....great work...
very very nice..
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Re: When I look into your eyes...
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by Mila on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 02:26:50 AM AEST
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| very powerful, i like it a lot! |
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Re: When I look into your eyes...
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by xxPullMyStringsxx on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 06:16:02 PM AEST
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I love this!
The style you used is perfect. |
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