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Sands of Time
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 10:39:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As it pours
Down on to me
I look in horror
What I have begun to see
Stuck behind transparent walls
Sinking lowing starting to fall
I can see
The world in front of me
But as the Sands of Time pass by
I can only let out an agonizing sigh
As I sink seeing the worlds time go so fast
I watch each grain each even as it becomes the worlds last
And then I welcomed Oblivion
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2010-11-19 22:39:03]
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Re: Sands of Time
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 01:04:34 AM AEST
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| Oh my gosh! It just so happens that I have a club for people who have welcomed oblivion!!! wanna join? lol but seriously... that was deep, i loved it! Time is precious, so spend it wisely! |
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Re: Sands of Time
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by shereal_14 on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:35:40 PM AEST
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| Wow! You have a real gift. Keep it up. |
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Re: Sands of Time
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by duff on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 05:13:32 PM AEST
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Dramatic and bizarre in an awesome way. I like how open this poem is and it seems the possibilities are endless. Well done.
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