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Reflections of her
Contributed by
shelby
on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 09:57:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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What do you think?
What do you feel?
Is it a nightmare?
or is it all real?
Look to the left
then look to the right
heart beating fast
soul filled with fright.
Night is your friend
your moments lived in the dark
gone is the light
no end and no start.
Spinning around
you wish you could see
the person you used to know
now where is she?
A lost shadow
a mere whisper
a long ago memory
a reflection of her.
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shelby
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2010-11-19 21:57:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Reflections of her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:04:55 PM AEST (User
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Nice poem..I like the
"A lost Shadow ..a mere whisper"
keep up your good writing and sharing it. |
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Re: Reflections of her
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 12:00:28 AM AEST (User
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"Spinning around
you wish you could see
the person you used to know
now where is she"
I couldn't agree more. |
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Re: Reflections of her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mila on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 02:31:32 AM AEST (User
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simply love the way you wrote this piece, nice job! |
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Re: Reflections of her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Galactose on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 02:46:28 PM AEST (User
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I like the "Night is your friend" line. |
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Re: Reflections of her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 09:41:01 PM AEST (User
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Hmmmm...seems to be some struggle and searching for one's self here. Not sure I completely understand it Michelle but the flow is great!
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Reflections of her
(User Rating: 1 ) by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 08:45:20 AM AEST (User
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Really good,especially the last two verses. |
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