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Shards
Contributed by
Benpriest
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Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 06:55:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In front of this mirror i stand only darkness surrounds my soul
grey tears run down my face as i search my mind for the colour of love
to find only bottomless voids of despair and emptiness
i search my empty soul for shards of light in my dark existence
only to find scares of past pain and hope .
But as i look up i find these grey tears dry in an instant and i feel a tingle in my heart
as i close my eyes and think of the pain and hurt i have survived
i feel strong i feel hope i awake from this daze of self destruction
i open my eyes and see colour for the first time a brilliant red surrounds my feet
i smile as i look down see life's love flowing from my wrists
freedom is finally mine as i fade into the darkness of evil and sadness forever
when you visit this place i will be the shards of light that steer you away from the same fate.
Copyright ©
Benpriest
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2010-11-19 18:55:05]
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Re: Shards
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 07:09:03 PM AEST
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| A very powerful write. I don't suffer from shards but from depression...I also have arthritis amonst other issues. I too know the feeling of dispair. |
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Re: Shards
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by JohnnyFallen on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 09:00:30 PM AEST
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| Mental issues can be and to some, are very difficult to live with. I have friends who feel the same way. This makes me wonder what you'll write next. Keep this up and who knows, it might get you somewhere. |
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