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My Sweetheart
Contributed by
GtM
on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 02:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's closing in on that day again
Yes the one that's almost here
And i haven't got a sweetheart
For that special day, that holiday
The one that's almost here
No i haven't got a sweetheart
To hold and be beside me
Yes it's closing on that day again
The one that's almost here
If only i had a sweetheart
If only i had you
Would you be my Valentine?
--Gregory Thomas Monroe
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Re: My Sweetheart
(User Rating: 1 ) by sidneyconrad23 on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 02:48:58 PM AEST (User
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Nice really really nice love the way you used the words you made the poem come alive keep writting good job. |
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Re: My Sweetheart
(User Rating: 1 ) by trackiller2006 on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 06:02:50 PM AEST (User
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Very nice write. I enjoyed it immensely. Keep on writing!
The Poet of Evil
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Re: My Sweetheart
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 10:56:08 PM AEST (User
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A sweet poem nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: My Sweetheart
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 02:11:01 AM AEST (User
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good job keep up the good work :) |
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