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The Diamond In the Sand
Contributed by
GtM
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Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 02:24:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Crystal clear and shining brightly
Is that diamond in the sand
Crystal clear and shining bright
As it buries out of sight
Quickly gone and soon forgotten
Is that diamond in the sand
Oh what shame
That no one came
And took it for their pleasure
Oh what shame that no one came
To claim this priceless treasure
Copyright ©
GtM
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2010-11-19 14:24:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Diamond In the Sand
(User Rating: 1 ) by sidneyconrad23 on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 02:51:34 PM AEST (User
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Short but to the point poetry are fillings deep inside us the only way to get thoses feelings out of us is to write them down another great job keep writting. |
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Re: The Diamond In the Sand
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 09:41:59 PM AEST (User
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I always love anything about diamonds and sand this is good.
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Re: The Diamond In the Sand
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:42:17 PM AEST (User
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A unique and creative vision made real making this a really nice piece of writing. I like the imagination. Great job.
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Re: The Diamond In the Sand
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 10:41:47 AM AEST (User
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so sweet and short and a very nice poem.
I like it
take care
Anbarean |
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