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Patience
Contributed by
jamesatteb
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Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 07:12:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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patience
Here i am my mind is racing
i can't stand still so i am pacing
the only way that i know how
to relieve this pressure building now
so many thoughts are coming at me
they will not stop or let me be
I try so hard to do whats right
but in my head theres always fights
i know that i have done you wrong
but i have learned and now i'm strong
my love for you it only grows
so just how much you'll never know
i need your trust to help me grow
into the man you used to know
I'm trying hard to make you see
a better man i'm trying to be
but in my head is constant thoughts
I know they're wrong and so i've fought
to push them down and make them go
i know you will never hurt me ,just so you know
i love you true and i am trying
to slow these thoughts and stop them lying
so bear with with me my love so true
just please believe i wont hurt you
ever again in this life
i'll push it down and kill the strife
so until then please hold me tight
and dont let go,it feels so right !!
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Re: Patience
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 07:25:20 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching write.
Hang tuff.
good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Patience
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 09:57:14 PM AEST
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