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False Hope
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 03:55:07 PM in AEST
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Waiting, wanting, yearning,
Feelings…
they just keep on churning.
Wishing, longing, hoping,
Love…
Trying… and failing… at coping.
Yelling, screaming, fighting,
Anger…
Like trying to hold onto lightning.
Sadness, Grief, Despair
Pain…
It hangs in the air.
Thinking, breathing, sighing,
Regret…
You fear…love’s hope… is dying.
Deserting, Departing, Leaving,
Defeat…
Most of love is believing.
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deusdeira
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2010-11-18 15:55:07]
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Re: False Hope
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 04:07:51 PM AEST
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Re: False Hope
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by duff on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 05:56:06 AM AEST
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I like how unique the style of writing is and it's outside the box. Hope truly is an awesome thing but sometimes you have to know when to say enough is enough and whats done is done. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Re: False Hope
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:04:51 PM AEST
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Interesting style, something I do not see that often and I like it. Super poem!
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