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The Lover
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The lover is deep inside your mind,
It isn't very hard to find.
The momentum shifts power,
You must be the one of the hour.
If you want to be supreme,
Then be the crop and the cream.
Check out that soul,
Get up and rock and roll.
You will see for the first time,
That the love you give is sublime.
I hope you will feel the need,
It's time for the speed.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2003-04-21 08:05:00]
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Re: The Lover
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by Wilder on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 05:50:37 PM AEST
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| Short but sweet, very cool :o) Good write, keep it up! |
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Re: The Lover
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:03:07 PM AEST
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I had one of those realisations once Candice,
when I suddenly realised that the love I have to give is actually better than just good enough! We do just need to let our inner beauty ouse out and then love not only knocks but smashes down our once reinforced doors.
Beautifully short poem Candice with what appears at first a hidden message, but on reading for a second and third time all seems clear I hope?!?:-) Well done!!
Have to go due to smelling that my dinner, which will now be classed as supper, is unfortunately burning! Sorry I was on for such a short time again.
Speak later Candice
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: The Lover
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:27:55 PM AEST
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Dean,
I am glad that you like it. I like this one alot myself. I think that it came out better than I thought it was going to.
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