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You.
Contributed by
Marqz
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Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 02:16:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I bleed, I cry,
just wanna die.
I lie when I smile
And haven't felt happy for a while.
It hurts, it do.
But what causes this pain,
is simply you.
Copyright ©
Marqz
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2010-11-18 14:16:41]
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Re: You.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 07:47:30 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc.
Well this is short and strait to the point. I like that.
Good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: You.
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by duff on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 05:49:09 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet but direct and crystal clear. Well done. |
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Re: You.
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 06:38:13 AM AEST
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| You like it you do have a way with words and you know how to used them nice really really nice just keep writing. |
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Re: You.
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| You like it you do have a way with words and you know how to used them nice really really nice just keep writing. |
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Re: You.
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| You like it you do have a way with words and you know how to used them nice really really nice just keep writing. |
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Re: You.
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| You like it you do have a way with words and you know how to used them nice really really nice just keep writing. |
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Re: You.
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| You like it you do have a way with words and you know how to used them nice really really nice just keep writing. |
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Re: You.
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by sidneyconrad23 on
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| You like it you do have a way with words and you know how to used them nice really really nice just keep writing. |
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Re: You.
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| You like it you do have a way with words and you know how to used them nice really really nice just keep writing. |
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Re: You.
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 06:38:20 AM AEST
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| You like it you do have a way with words and you know how to used them nice really really nice just keep writing. |
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