|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Alone
Contributed by
chellePalazzo
on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 10:22:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
i sit here and i am alone
You are far away across the sea, i am alone
The promise you made to come back to me was never kept
i am alone
i loved you completely but it wasn't enough
i am alone
Copyright ©
chellePalazzo
... [
2010-11-18 10:22:12]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 11:41:17 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow another touchy one ....but I hope and wish for you the best that the way you feel for the person....sure he do for you too and this deep feeling will one day bring you two close. But keep writting and keep sharing. All the best. |
|
|
Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by resist77 on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 05:50:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I'm not sure whether this person truly does exist across the sea or not but I liked the incorporation of the sea because the ocean is so vast it seems impossible to cross. Thus, making it impossible for you to conceive the thought that this person is ever coming back. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
