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Sincere Prayer
Contributed by
2bpositive
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Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 04:40:36 AM in AEST
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Need to pray alone
lips parting whispered silence
tone for heaven's throne
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2010-11-18 04:40:36]
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Re: Sincere Prayer
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by potentialpoet96 on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 10:08:33 AM AEST
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for being as short as it is,
it speaks alot.
i love it (: |
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Re: Sincere Prayer
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 07:32:43 PM AEST
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Exquisite haiku. You capture the true essence of prayer here. Terrific!
Heidi |
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Re: Sincere Prayer
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by UAnwar on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 08:33:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful, use of juxtapositioning in the second line reinforces the unified call for prayer which at the same time is subjective to the person who is praying (alone).
Tone for heaven's throne ::: A beautiful line.
Thank You |
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