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Gone is forever
Contributed by
UNORTHODOX
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 08:20:49 AM in AEST
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A women's love;
is like a mother dove;
soaring high above the sky;
with her young,
a precious moment,
so tender to touch,
every heart's waking desire
A women's love;
is like a secret meadow,
where the grass is grown on youth
and souls melt into one;
like a golden eternity
A women's love;
is like a ship in the night,
floating on hope,
in an effortless motion,
caressing the crashing waves,
weathering the deadly storm,
sailing against the wind,
time after time again,
and when it's gone,
gone is forever;
a women's love
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UNORTHODOX
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2010-11-17 08:20:49]
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Re: Gone is forever
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by PreciousKitten on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 11:11:09 AM AEST
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| i love this poem, because its so true. it speaks to me.keep writing |
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Re: Gone is forever
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by duff on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:51:16 PM AEST
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What a stunning write that flows with a delicate touch. A beautiful piece about a love only a woman can offer. That touch that lets you know everything will be ok no matter what happens. A calm only she can provide and when it's gone you feel the void. Outstanding piece of work.
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Re: Gone is forever
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 04:32:52 PM AEST
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Very beautiful, sweet and true.
It's full of feeling and emotions.
Awesome.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Gone is forever
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by desire on
Sunday, 12th August 2012 @ 02:48:22 PM AEST
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everyone im sure that her love is that way,
but not everyone loves
thanks for sharing, i truly enjoyed readint it |
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