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Secrets of My heart
Contributed by
thyface
on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 01:04:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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The love between you and me is great,
It’s the truth between you and me I hate,
The fact that no one knows
Is a fact that I will never show.
I think about you day and night,
I think about you any time I might,
The fact that my love is strong,
Another reason why I can't be wrong.
To be with you is what I want,
To be with you is what I sought,
A day that I thought would never come,
A day that would be a bridal one.
People think it should not be,
People should not marry interracially
But look at what shall be
A day we walk down the aisles,
You and me.
Copyright ©
thyface
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2010-11-15 01:04:28]
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Re: Secrets of My heart
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by Bexstasy on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 05:01:48 AM AEST
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| This is good especially for a first attempt! I particularly like the final stanza. :) |
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Re: Secrets of My heart
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by jcline5 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 08:54:10 AM AEST
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| a poem this is a poem this shall forever be unless you take that first step |
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Re: Secrets of My heart
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 10:58:16 PM AEST
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YOu keep right on writing. I felt this poem and to me that makes it poetry.
I hope things work out the way you want them to as well.
Michelle |
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