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The River
Contributed by
RealmX
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Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Cascading steams of water
Joined together in a single bond
Flowing to its heart's content
Light flickering off its pristine surface
Woven strands of golden tapestry
Life triumphantly flourises
Nutruring and molding
Destroying and rebuilding
So are the ways of our lives
Never ceasing to glide
Over the earth made so long ago
Magnificence eternal
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Re: The River
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by venkat on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 05:55:45 AM AEST
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| good i love such peaceful flow.... venkat |
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Re: The River
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 06:03:24 AM AEST
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| Excellent write RealmX, majesticly flowing words, can almost picture the relaxing current. |
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Re: The River
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:16:46 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful... i write in a similar fashion when writing of Nature... blessings... |
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