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Nostalgia for the never witnessed
Contributed by
Mice
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Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 10:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I hate writing.
I despise the tool.
I requite in sorrow
And wonder: Pen or Pencil?
The keyboard, my enemy
modern man(?), gone astray
from queue to pee and
ey to elle, to
zee and em.
A modern man, tired of modern men
No thought, no skill, no birth right,
Just pen, paper, and a liberal arts degree
Natural talent vanquished,
Hard work liberated,
I write… as a modern man…
Copyright ©
Mice
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2010-11-14 22:22:30]
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Re: Nostalgia for the never witnessed
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 10:30:14 PM AEST
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I go with raw, natural talent on loan from God.
Good write.
welcome to YPDC.
Blessing,
emy
Happy writing. |
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Re: Nostalgia for the never witnessed
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 11:42:47 PM AEST
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| As a good friend said to me once, you cannot teach someone to write,I am with emystar its raw talent either there or not. I have the same attitude with art but that's another story,thus begins the struggle and then the identity, very thought provoking write. |
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Re: Nostalgia for the never witnessed
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by ming on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 09:29:03 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this effort...for what that's worth. :)
ming |
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