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Reverberate

Contributed by UpsAndDowns on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 07:53:41 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

In four days my world has crashed,
The bones in my body smashed
To bits, and painful reminders of
What is not continuing. The love
Was lost in time and space, between
The borders of a lively dream,
But dreams will fade and flicker
When you realize what the bigger
Picture is for life, and smiles turn
To frowns, love gets turned down
And buried in the dark heart of one,
Who used to close her eyes and run
Blindly toward you in faith, and
One day smacked head first into truth, land-
ing in a pile of spears, gouging into her flesh
To prove the pain and love have all mesh-
ed into hurt and confusion, steady
Going to the edge of the cliff and ready
To finish the pain for good
But don’t let them rule your should
have’s and could have’s, that taint your
Memories and thoughts of the more
To come in the future, the good that waits
When the pain passes and hesitates,
And doesn’t stop her heart from reaching
For the new goal that is teaching
Her how to love again and accept pain,
As a part of the clouds and rain,
But moving to shed light for the sun
Because good follows when bad is done.
Don’t forget to laugh and cry,
But most of all ask yourself why?
Why am I in this place today,
Where everything I see is heavy and gray.
And how do I move forward to release
The gray and find even a piece
Of my life before the pain
But I know it will never be the same,
I am different from before you
and because of you, and that means I am new,
now different from before,
I can start a new score
For my life, the melody to lead me
To the next stage, the rests to see
What has taken shape from
The efforts I have made, and the lives changed, stun’
ned at what truly has prevailed,
Everyday as I exhale
My grief and sorrow,
To see the light of tomorrow.

Copyright Â© UpsAndDowns ... [ 2010-11-14 19:53:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Reverberate (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 09:46:12 PM AEST
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Sad but full of hope.
i can totally relate to this masterpiece.
You did a great job getting this down on paper. That is a major accomplishment in it's own right.
Hang tuff.
Huggs, blessings, healing,
emy

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