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Black Ice(Judge Not)
Contributed by
UNORTHODOX
on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 01:29:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It's easy to judge;
atmospheres born,
on terrain
which is not our own,
some stories are told,
from angles remote,
leaving to grasp;
what is not whole
Perception from a distance;
stifle's in part,
optical interpretations,
peripheral view,
be cast into,
a sea
of unknown pasture
Impressions derived;
may be belied,
hold your tongue,
before you speak,
what's unseen
by the eye,
may just be tied,
to a patch
of black ice.
Copyright ©
UNORTHODOX
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2010-11-14 13:29:48]
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Re: Black Ice(Judge Not)
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 10:52:42 PM AEST
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Very interesting writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Black Ice(Judge Not)
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 11:54:44 PM AEST
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| This is a great way of saying still tongue wise head well written |
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Re: Black Ice(Judge Not)
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by Voyager on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 04:02:18 AM AEST
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| Very interesting approach and a great finish |
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Re: Black Ice(Judge Not)
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 06:43:11 AM AEST
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| i like i think lol |
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Re: Black Ice(Judge Not)
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by duff on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 01:04:12 PM AEST
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A fantastic write that shares a glimpse of the thought process of an intellectual poet. Stirring and imaginative. Another write for the mind to feast on.
duff |
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Re: Black Ice(Judge Not)
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by ming on
Wednesday, 17th August 2011 @ 08:51:03 AM AEST
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Ahh...words spewed too soon do have the power to crash and burn. Great ending.
ming |
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Re: Black Ice(Judge Not)
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by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 3rd September 2011 @ 07:27:43 AM AEST
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This one is a monster. You write like I do -- or I write like you do -- in some ways. There is this underlying disregard for convention, i.e., an unorthodox drive... whence we don't fully know -- or at least in my case I don't know.
I am staggered by the last stanza. It really speaks to me. You have more than a way with words.
Reminds me -- I wrote a poem named A WAY WITH WORDS -- dedicated to this wonderful young poet I know -- a poet who knows not her own rare -- extremely rare -- natural ability. We struggle to let go of the ropes she never even held on to... sad she doesn't see it. Might tell her abt this website.
Anyhow, Black Ice is unto itself -- even among the handful of your poems that I've thus far read. Congratulations!
--FH |
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Re: Black Ice(Judge Not)
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 05:46:52 AM AEST
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| ahhhh... what a truth. Judgement and leaping to conclusions... the folly of mankind. I love the message. |
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