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The Best Thing You Had.
Contributed by
Bexstasy
on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 02:35:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You've ****** it up,
For the very last time,
And it's okay,
It's totally fine!
The things between us,
That I kept safe,
Are gone now,
It's far too late,
To fix the lies,
The things you did,
Your selfish ways,
All that you hid,
I'm leaving,
And I won't come back,
You've just lost,
The best thing you had.
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Bexstasy
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2010-11-14 02:35:03]
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Re: The Best Thing You Had.
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 06:19:19 AM AEST
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| I know the feeling. No worries, there is someone better who deserves ya :P |
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Re: The Best Thing You Had.
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:40:35 PM AEST
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I agree. If they cant give you back the same love you give them find someone else who would love to!
this is another great write. I like the feeling you put into your work, the emotions come through well |
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Re: The Best Thing You Had.
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by girlbballjunky101 on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 10:16:12 AM AEST
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| wow!!! i LOVE it!!!! |
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Re: The Best Thing You Had.
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 12:37:14 PM AEST
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That's the Becky I know!! Extremely angry with one of her men! You tell 'em!!
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: The Best Thing You Had.
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by poeticjestix on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 02:01:20 AM AEST
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Hope you're over things now! Says it all in the few words needed. Good.
now I hope you're glad
You've just lost
the best thing you had? |
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Re: The Best Thing You Had.
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by hungarianhaze on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 08:06:21 PM AEST
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| This is a straight up poem! good piece of work ..I feel bad for whom ever did this..they lost some one good. |
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