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The Girls In Red
Contributed by
duff
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Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 11:40:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The pretty girls of glass
Seducing office ties
Wanting pockets gold
Approach and dream boy
Wall Street opens wide
The cliffs begin to peak
Morality breaks in beads
A grin for future reduction
His fix temp to fire
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-11-13 11:40:51]
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Re: The Girls In Red
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 02:08:37 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
I must say I am liking your work more and more. This is full of dark images and I love the way you express yourself. Well written my friend, I look forward to more. |
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Re: The Girls In Red
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 07:48:03 AM AEST
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| The complete metaphor and process of seduction,with the price tag attached in one wonderfully expressive sharp as a knife observation of the age old game of predator and prey now that's class! |
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Re: The Girls In Red
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by ming on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 08:37:18 AM AEST
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Nice! Love this line;
'Morality breaks in beads'
ming
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Re: The Girls In Red
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by UNORTHODOX on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 09:47:13 AM AEST
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Part of me filled with sorrow and tears,
another part with understanding,
but in the end I saw life for what it is,
while this passage is nothing short of stunning
truely your fluency is superb
-UNORTHODOX |
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