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No escape
Contributed by
jamesatteb
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Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 07:51:58 PM in AEST
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No Escape
As i sit here on my bed
My thoughts are dark and full of dread
whats wrong with me
why cant i see
I want to run i want to hide
and bury deep these things inside
my fears are strong and coming true
my biggest fear is losing you
I see the truth,cant take the pain
How many times i've cried in vain
I have to leave I'm in too deep
Or wind up in eternal sleep
must leave this place so far behind
and leave behind my tortured mind
i see the door its open wide
No darkened places left to hide
And as i sit upon my bed
i fear the thought of being dead
and as i run towards the open door
i see it shut forevermore
I'm trapped inside my living hell
The only place i seem to dwell
I cant escape this is my fate
I tried to leave but was too late...
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Re: No escape
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by emystar on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 08:24:27 PM AEST
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This is really sad but great writing.
One can feel your frustrations in this write.
It's never too late as long as there's breathe in the body.
Stop right where you are and take one moment at a time. Take things day by day.
We all feel this way at times in our lives. I take meds from my Dr. to cope.
Life is too short at the most so try being kind to yourself.
It's no shame to get medical help.
I take Zoloft and rather than live in desperation like I use to I say thank God for Dr.s and Zoloft.
If you need a friend just P,M, I'm usually around here some where.
Big huggs, blessings, prayer,
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Re: No escape
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by Bexstasy on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 11:32:51 AM AEST
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Wow, this is good! I see what you mean about similarities in the way we feel and stuff!
I do really like this poem, even though it is very sad. |
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Re: No escape
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by JohnnyFallen on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 03:35:54 PM AEST
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| As how I feel as well sometimes. This touched me and I believe this a very well written piece of poetry. Bless you and thank God for giving you talent. |
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