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I can feel you around me
Contributed by
Liquor_And_Love_Lost
on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 06:47:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I can still feel your lips,
Press against mine.
I can feel your breath,
As you whisper softly in my ear.
I can still feel your warmth,
From when you held me.
I can hear your voice.
It spoke out the words 'I love you'.
But it wasnt true.
You never did.
If you were being honest,
Then things wouldnt be like this.
I dont know if I should move on,
Or strap in tight
For this rollercoaster ride.
Truth is,
Im in love with you.
Why cant our love be true?
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2010-11-12 18:47:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I can feel you around me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 08:44:07 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC.
This is really good writing.
Hang tuff.
Keep up the good work.
huggs, blessings,
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