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I Want To Thank You
Contributed by
Anbarean
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Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 11:12:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to thank you for having me in your life
and I want to thank you for holding my hand
And let me walk through your life
I want to thank you for the way you look at me
and show me the colors throughout your life
I want to thank you for the way you touch me
and gave me the feeling I never felt through my life
I want to thank you for loving me from the depth
That I can’t be more loved as I am through my life
Copyright ©
Anbarean
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2010-11-11 11:12:35]
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Re: I Want To Thank You
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 08:57:27 PM AEST
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You're welcome. ^_^
keep writing. always, abraham |
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Re: I Want To Thank You
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by ammar on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 08:47:20 AM AEST
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A good, brief write. Enjoyed it very much.
If I can offer you a suggestion, read it out to the one you're thanking. That may give your words renewed power and make the same poem even more attractive.
Keep writing
Peace
Ammar |
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