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Loneliness Waiting
Contributed by
PhantomsLDY
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Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
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The Raven's lonesome call echoes through the night
Her lonely calls seem to go unanswered
It seems she is alone in her heartbreak
Her days are dull and empty
Her nights are long and cold
Her heart longs to be with her love so far away
In the long dark night
She remembers their beautiful and happy flight
Sometimes she hears his heart answering her call
She hears it as a whisper in her soul
My love is still strong and true
My heart belongs to no one but you
With his love whispering in her heart
She survives the long cold nights deep and dark
She soothes her pain with the knowledge that soon
The dawn will come again and the sun will shine upon them both
Fore with a love so strong and true they are never truely parted.
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 01:58:53 AM AEST
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lovely write
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 02:02:21 AM AEST
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Awww Raven, this is so beautiful!!! I'm sure your calls are never unanswered. I hope and pray for the day when you and your love will be reunited..... This is truly a treasure!!
Hugs to you both..
Jenni |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by karoody on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 02:48:52 AM AEST
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i wish for you to be together again soon as well...a beautiful write...and so true...love will never let two hearts be parted....
hugs
kara |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by wazarov on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 03:20:31 PM AEST
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| dear tracie it is very wonderful but so painful, i believe that you will soon join your beloved and your torments will see their end. |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 11:36:21 PM AEST
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This is sad yet beautiful. I hope that your love comes back to you soon. I really enjoyed this poem.
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 02:47:44 AM AEST
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| 'Her days are dull and empty. Her nights are long and cold.' I love those lines! It so clearly describes the feeling I've had when my sweetheart was away. Good writing, PhantomsLDY ! Friend Bizzy |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by Apartment213 on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 02:53:48 AM AEST
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| spelndid poem!!!! |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:14:06 AM AEST
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| beautifully exquisite write, i love it, and your style, may that sun shine for you both soon:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by venkat on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 04:04:11 AM AEST
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Hello Young lady,....So you are Mrs. Phantom! sorry friend. .. I missed your beautiful poems..
.. the Raven spirit is wonder fully painted here..It's a lovely poem.. seen your comments on my poem.. thank you very much.. venkat |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 11:22:24 PM AEST
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Well done my love, I felt everyword, of everyline. This poem moved me but soon I shall be in youe arms, with Joe singing to us, may the nights be long but never cold. I love you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:28:18 PM AEST
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| Thank you for the wonderful comment and you very much welcome I enjoyed it very much. |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:28:57 PM AEST
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| Thank you so much. |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:30:06 PM AEST
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| Thanks Jenni for the comment and the prayer. |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:31:04 PM AEST
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| Thanks Kara and I truly hope not. |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:31:57 PM AEST
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| Thanks Dean it was sweet of you to say. |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:33:14 PM AEST
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| Thanks Nessa. It will very soon! |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:34:13 PM AEST
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| Thank you and I am glad you enjoyed it. |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:35:29 PM AEST
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| Thanks Bizzy I am glad you enjoyed it!!! |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:36:32 PM AEST
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| Thanks Kenny glad you liked it!! |
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Re: Loneliness Waiting
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 04:39:12 PM AEST
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| Thanks babe and I know but the waiting is the worst. |
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