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Sky of Love
Contributed by
duff
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Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 06:54:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Every night he blows her a kiss
In morning she warms his face
Ripped apart by heavens stones
Tears of fire burst from her eyes
She begged the gods to set them free
Two lamps abandoned in bloom
Isolation scattered over skies
Wishful gazes wander blind
An eternity of hurt corralled in space
Lovers teased by the rise and fall
Banished souls in a world beauty sleeps to hide
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2010-11-11 06:54:06]
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Re: Sky of Love
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 09:05:30 AM AEST
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Truly a solid, seemingly effortless piece
this passage is flawless,full of depth ,wisdom,
and elite conveyance of heart
surely an honorable write
very well done
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Sky of Love
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 09:47:18 AM AEST
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Well done Duff
this is a fine piece of work, highly imaginative and free flowing. I like this very much. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Sky of Love
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 08:56:13 PM AEST
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Beauty is the absence of need. Love is the absence of both need and beauty, which is why it becomes undefinable.
keep writing. always, abraham |
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Re: Sky of Love
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:26:44 PM AEST
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| Wow you know poetry are feelings that are deep inside us and the only way to let others know how we feel is to write them down nice really nice keep writing. |
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