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All You Radicals
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2bpositive
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Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 11:28:31 PM in AEST
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For all you radicals, there is a time to stand up and shout
Refuse to belong to those that choose the easy way out
For what purpose would he decree, when G-D granted us life
If not to stand firm and avoid all forms of strife
I'm a radical, to this I must admit
Always looked upon differently, as if I'm unfit
But why follow others who think they suffice
To control everyone else with the roll of their dice
Having gone through alot, one begins to discern
There's a time for discipline, and a time for concern
Stand up and be counted, you alone have begun
To realize you can be different, and still be as one
All you radicals, to you alone do I salute
Your ways may be different, but none could refute
Imagine our world, without you, what it would be
A place where individuality could never ever be Free....
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Re: All You Radicals
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by duff on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 05:35:51 AM AEST
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The attitude flows through this poem and it's awesome. The lines are well done and there is wit which adds something.
"I'm a radical, to this I must admit
Always looked upon differently, as if I'm unfit"
I like that line and also the title.
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Re: All You Radicals
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 09:17:29 AM AEST
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Well this piece alone states your heart
I admire the tone,the atmosphere,
and potentcy of this write
This is definately a passage driven by cause
immaculate, articulate, fine writting!
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Re: All You Radicals
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 09:58:44 PM AEST
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| I think that just writing poetry is pretty radical to some people lol but seriously, great poem. Radicals are awesome. |
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