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What Lies Within
Contributed by
JAlexandra
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 08:36:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A pain so deeply engraved
Its origins unknown
Scattered thoughts
Magnified failures
Broken promises
Distorted illusions
Persuading into action destructive conclusions
The unforeseen
The unexplained
The shame
A shattered reflection
Depiction of what lies within
Copyright ©
JAlexandra
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2010-11-10 20:36:43]
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Re: What Lies Within
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by duff on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 05:25:45 AM AEST
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The thoughts and feelings that haunt us within I think you captured in awesome form. Your lines are strong and powerful and it adds another dimension to the poem. Great write.
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Re: What Lies Within
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by RowenM on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 04:23:34 PM AEST
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The category couldn't fit any better.
Self-Struggling.
Nice work ;) |
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Re: What Lies Within
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 11:15:04 AM AEST
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| Wow I like this write alot love the way you used the words nice really really nice. |
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